Question

れおん

この文があっているか教えて下さい。

I went to Tsuketsi river to go camping with my family on Summer vacation.

Tsuketsi is famous in Japan for Takadaaru Fall.

We enjoyed swimming,fishing,playing volleyball,and diving.

My father good at cooking, so he shown a fine skill.

It was very dericious. I want to eat once again.

During the summer vacation I had club activities almost every day.

It was hard , but It was very fun.
Therefore I went to there without a break.

This summer vacation turned into a great memory.

Answer 1

なお

最後にI'm sure it is my treasure.とかを入れるのが好きだねー

れおん

はるほどっ！いいですね！

Answer 2

なお

部活のところで、
They were hard but much more fun.とかのほうが好きだねー
Therefore は不自然かなw
So I had had no time to take a rest until I went there.かな

れおん

最後の文はいやくするとどうなりますかね？？何度もすみません

なお

だから、行くまでに休む時間がありませんでした

れおん

だから、休むことなく部活にいきました
というふうにしたいのですが、、、

れおん

ほんと、ごめんなさい！なんども！

なお

あ！そういうことか！

なお

I had club~ so I had no time to take a rest. I was tired to practice my (部活) skills.However I also enjoyed at the same time because I could feel my improving.とかかなー

なお

大丈夫ーw

れおん

こんな丁寧にありがとうございます‼とても参考になりましたー！

なお

問題ないよ！

Answer 3

なお

with my family on myとか、the summer vacationかなー
My father is good at か、
My father is a so good cookかな
I want to eat them once again.かなー

れおん

いろいろ抜けてました。。。ありがとうございます

Answer 4

なお

I went to~ to campか、to enjoy campingのほうがいいかなー

れおん

ありがとうございます！他は大丈夫ですかねー？？

なお

少し変なのはあるかなw